Hope of Nations

Hey guys, this is actually my poem for my english assignment in the college, do give some comments ya =)
(Unfortunately my lecturer doesn't accept it, and I have to type a new one out, but however, I decide to keep this vary first poem. Although it is verses from the Bible, but I do love this poem =D )

Still remember at the ninth hour,
He cried out n a loud voice to His Father;
"Eloi, Eloi, lama sabachthani?"
Meaning of"My God, my God, why have you forsaken me?"

Yet the people thought,
He has stricken by God;
He was despised and rejected by men,
He was despised, and we esteemed Him not.

But He was pierced for our transgressions,
Crushed for our iniquities;
The punishment that brought us peace was upon Him,
By His wounds we are healed.

Suddenly the curtain of the temple was torn into two,
From top to the bottom;
People who stood there and saw He dead,
Said loudly,"Surely this man was the Son of God!"

When the Sabbath was over,
They found that the stone have been rolled;
As they entered the tomb,
They saw a young man dressed in a white robe;
Who was and who is and who is to come,
His name, Jesus Christ the Son of God.